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Page One -Lioa- by mercgirl, literature

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Page One -Lioa-

He tossed his black satchel onto the cushioned bench and sat next to it. Running a hand through his hair, Sven sighed and glanced around the hardened cottage. He tugged on his ear until Meghan bustled through the doorway with a wooden bucket. She smiled broadly at him and sloshed past to the back door where she tossed out the dirty dish water. As she came back he sighed again, unaware of the act, and she stopped in front of him; concern was written on her face as the Earth Guardian looked up at her in confusion. “Sven Destiny, are you bothered by something?” Her light voice was perfect in articulation and Sven felt a smile tug at

The Perfect Guy by mercgirl, literature

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The Perfect Guy

I sat on my bedside, half asleep and yet up Twirling the lid to my sparkly wish cup. Inside was a list I had made months before One of all the things I was hoping for. He had to be funny, childlike and smart; He had to love Jesus with all of his heart. I prayed as I twirled that little clay top Please, Lord, even though this is just a prop Let him be like You in all possible ways Help him to be loyal all of our days. Once in a while it would catch my eye And I’d turn the lid for the perfect guy. Taller than me with hair chocolate dark One who’d like to go walk in the park. Lord, make him loving, strong and sweet Bless

Kelminda Chances by mercgirl, literature

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Kelminda Chances

Kelminda Chances A feeling of desolation washed over them as they came across the desert scene. Children’s mocking laughter and the cold, hard yelling of the dark skinned market people seemed almost muffled in the arid climate around them. Dust filled Mieka’s mouth and she coughed then doubled over, unable to stop. The stone cottages stood like uncaring soldiers along the packed earth street as Kenya turned to hand her the water canteen they had found abandoned on the lake side. A gentle breeze ruffled Sven’s now dusty red hair but it seemed to push him away as he took a step forward. The market animals bleated and cawed and

King's Army Ch. 3 by mercgirl, literature

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King's Army Ch. 3

King’s Army The air didn’t budge until morning because that was when Kenya woke up sobbing. Her legs pulled up to her chest in a sitting position, face buried in her knees, she cried words to the wind that pushed and pulled currents around her. Leghut and Nye were the first to worry as no one else noticed, sleep held them tightly. Lytah was no where to be seen as Leghut stamped and whinnied. Nye took flight and landed by Octavio silently. Mieka and Thonru next both jumped up and reached for swords clasped to their waists. Mieka dropped to her knees when she recognized what had woken her. “Kenya? Kenya! Dear, what’s th

The First Meeting end by mercgirl, literature

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The First Meeting end

He dropped to his knees and sucked in water, coughing most of it back up as his throat took the full shock of the cold water. His miniscule conscience told him that the green tint to the water couldn’t be healthy, but he shoved that voice rudely aside and rummaged through his pack for a blade. Carefully, Octavio’s green eyes watched his reflection in the water as best he could while the sharp blade slowly chopped off facial hair. He left a little patch under his lip, as was custom in his home village for married men, and was startled into almost nicking his chin when the bird fluttered in front of his face. The blade dropped back in

The First Meeting II by mercgirl, literature

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The First Meeting II

“My mom, I’ve really never known my mom. So I know where you’re coming from Mieka, I think we’re going to make a great group of kids. That’s what we are, kids, but we can do this… whatever it is we have to do.” His eyes were blinking rapidly and Kenya’s hand found his shoulder in empathy. He turned to look at her and saw a sad smile, like a tender pout, melting his insides, making him feel like someone finally understood. Kenya’s mouth formed an ‘o’ but no sound came forth. Mieka was watching the ground, brown locks obscuring her face as Thonru’s voice exploded. “I feel terri

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Strawberries Then Starlight by mercgirl, literature

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Strawberries Then Starlight

The tinted evening sky The envious moon gazing Upon you and me sitting Under the pine tree shadows. I hand you a berry while You open your mouth wide You smile, red juice on your lips. My hand intertwined with yours, Your warmth against my side, Your love telling me That it'll always be this way, With you next to me In the night of the country. We set there just so for the longest time, And I think I might've dozed off. Though you never mentioned it… My head against your chest Your strong arms around me, Keeping me safe as I slept. Then you whispered in my ear The most dreadful words of life, The words that say we mu

Dreaming of Passion by mercgirl, literature

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Dreaming of Passion

Burning passion living in me. An unexplainable feeling coursing through my body. I close my eyes as I sit alone trying to understand. Nothing comes except the darkness of my lids. I feel it moving as I think of you. Your warm strong arms encircling me. My heart beats quickly as I open my eyes to see you inches from me. I'm surprised beyond speaking as I try to question, but you pull me up and shut my lips with a single finger. You smile and make me blush deeply with your motion. The warm sensation pouring through my veins as you press your lips to mine. Inwardly, I sigh blissfully and enjoy the perfect moment. I hear a soft buzzing

Sweet Life Pie by mercgirl, literature

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Sweet Life Pie

Somewhere inside I know the truth, But I never thought once about my youth To be trapped in a body not quite mine, And finding out that it's just not fine, To think you're gorgeous when Your friend is having problems just then About her size and how she would look Sitting just so on the cover of a book. She knows she isn't a model, but She wishes she wasn't just put Out of mind when your ideas block Everything else out except the clock. Running around thinking you're fine Even though you know 'it just can't be mine.' The sensation of a man next to you Is something your friends just can't relate to. They need that satisf

Thinking of Green by mercgirl, literature

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Thinking of Green

What more could it mean To love and be happy Being green, blue, and sappy Living the life That I thought would be rife Having the fun times advance Into even romance And still waiting for the one To have fun in the sun To take my hand and explore The love life never had before To help me through the tough and bad To be there when it's been had Just to wait with me And living to be With your hand in mine With you knowing I'm fine With everything turning out just right And living life with glowing green light The glowing is there To show you'll always care And the green is the other Because it's her favorite color And

The Biggest Crybaby by mercgirl, literature

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The Biggest Crybaby

I find out that I like a man, so I cry about it. I find out that the man I've liked likes my cousin, so I cry about it. I find out that the man I've liked for years likes me, so I cry about it. I find out that the man I've liked is the man I love, so I cry about it I find out that the man I've liked and loved for years wishes we could be closer, so I cry about it. I find out that the man I've liked and loved for years is going to college, so I cry about it. I find out that the man I've liked and loved for years is coming back just for me, so I cry about it. I find out that the man I've liked and loved for years loves me (and he even to

Lioa, Wind Guardian by mercgirl, literature

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Lioa, Wind Guardian

Following a known path she smiled at the deserted quiet of the open desert. Hearing the desert birds chirp and giggle at their own kind made her laugh. She started thinking about life in general and loving the thought of being alive after all she's been through. She tugged on her shirt this fall morning and looked up into the sky. Seeing clouds made her want to fly, to reach up and grab a cloud and hold on to it for ever. She wanted to dive through them like she was swimming. She took a long straight pole from seemingly nowhere and whispered ancient language and the pole grew. She whispered more ancient language and a glowing orb wra

Lioa, Lava Blood by mercgirl, literature

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Lioa, Lava Blood

The volcano rumbled, and the lava flowed but still he scaled the mountain. Magma rushed toward him at break neck speed. His eyes widened as he saw the mountain produce yet another burst of boiling lava. The melted rock was only yards away when the boy calmly pulled out a magnificent sword, the blade blinding with white light. His red woolen shirt was transformed into a blood-red armor plate sculpted just for his growing muscular chest. His jeans were morphed into shin and calf shields etched with white gold and red ruby stones. A red-gold and silver band appeared connecting his left wrist and forearm, seemingly attached. Holding in the

Lioa, Ocean Veins by mercgirl, literature

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Lioa, Ocean Veins

Swimming quickly through the waves a determined look engraved on her face she knew she had to beat it. The icy waves tried drowning her but she had to move on. The wind picked up and it was all she could do to stay above the water. The young lady's short chestnut hair was plastered to her face and head. Suddenly the waves stopped, completely. Not a whisper of wind came from any direction. The black sky darkened, if possible, and the young lady stopped her tired arms and began to tread water. The water was completely silent and not a ripple was formed. Looking around, her eyes started adjusting to the pitch black of the water and sky. Sh

Lioa, Wood Son by mercgirl, literature

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Lioa, Wood Son

Trudging along, for the first time, a boy of young age walked completely among the shrubs. He carried a knapsack not completely full. He nodded casually at the birds who seemed to know him. The ground vibrated and he stopped to listen. Then the ground shook violently, which took him to his knees. He looked shocked as trees start to uproot and fall. He whispered an ancient call and a staff appeared in his outstretched left hand. He stood up, running his fingers through his maple colored hair, and tensed his arms and legs, ready for any attack. New garments are about his person. His legs and arms are enveloped in close fitting green and

Page 1, Chapter 1: The First by mercgirl, literature

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Page 1, Chapter 1: The First

We now go into the future for the real story. Looking past the dusty road we see a cottage. As we look into the cottage, we see a youth in anger. "Kenya, do be kind and fetch some more water for Angelica, please." An older woman was standing over a bed looking quite concerned. "Yes, mum." Kenya backed slowly out of the door and ran when she got the chance. Angelica always gets more attention than me, it's not fair she gets everything her little heart desires and, me, I have to go get it! Stupid, Anglica! "Young lady, stop and answer my question." A great man on a metal horse was addressing our Kenya. Yes, of course, I'm always the one to

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mercgirl

Oct 9, 2008

Woah

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Guess what?! I don't even have to tell you because if you're reading this you know! I'm back after FOREVER of being not-here. Isn't that great? Well, I think it is, so I guess it really doesn't matter what you think. Also, I would like to make known that I'm at bible college in KY and I love it here! God is everywhere on campus and I've met so many people and now we're all like family! So, I have a printed copy of The Unity. I have some friends helping me edit it because my editor is busy. (now I know he's busy restoring his creativity) Anyway, The Unity is still moving for anyone who cares. I will, yes, start working on the sequel Lioa

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Aug 30, 2007

-Lioa- -The Unity-

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OH EM GOSH I changed the title. Not that anyone will care except for Micah and it was his idea. So Lioa is now The Unity. The sequel will probably be called Lioa... because she'll actually show up! So it's done. The Entire Book That Took Up The Last Four (?) Years Of My Life Is Done. It's complete, and now I'm moving on to the prequel because I have more information for that one. Actually, I don't know what I'm going to do, but I'm done with the Elond books until I graduate. In reality I'm extremely relieved that it's over for now. I think I'll try writing the next one all inside of next summer. Three month dead line, I won't touch the main

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mercgirl

Jun 27, 2007

-Lioa-

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I should get the ENTIRE book done by the end of August this year. YAY!!! The First Meeting get's kind of cheesy and sappy 'round 'bout the beginning half of what I have done. Please let me know what needs to be fixed. Also, please feel free to send me ideas. I probably won't use them unless I can see how it would work with what I already have. You can say I'm close minded about my writing... I have a pretty good idea about this book and the next one. The second is kind of 'sketchy' yet. I'm attempting five pages a day since last Thursday (the twenty first) and I'm already twenty seven pages behind. I'm apparently not good with deadlines,

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Mar 10, 2007

Thank you much for the recent

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Jan 21, 2007

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Jan 15, 2007

Oh, luv! Tis' been forever since I have seen you it seems.

Voot. Yay art. I might just take a picture of the comic, though. I'm itching to put it up.